A Short, Untitled Play For Marionettes

[MockBot]

Automatically generated comment thread for A Short, Untitled Play For Marionettes (http://www.i-mockery.com/visionary/marionette-play.php).

[Trash]

Absolutely insane and pointless, like always.

Max, marry me.

[Jaimas]

By the gods, this is artwork.

[Relaxing Dragon]

Ridiculous beyond most forms of measure, and I absolutely loved it. Wonderful job, made me laugh (probably more than I should've, especially once the dog went down).

[Relaxing Dragon]

Also, who's Bruce?

[greenimp]

I... I dont know what to say... this is... pure artwork, created by a master, I... just... wow...

[Colonel Flagg]

WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO MAKE YOU SHUT UP YOU, STUPID SERBIAN KIKE?!

Genius. Pure genius.

Is this "Dave" any relation to Dave from the pool hall, or is that just some sort of sick coincidence?

[OxBlood]

I like that kind of randomness/insanity. Reminds me of myself.

[mburbank]

Dave is my favorite, all purpose everyman name.

Is there a Bruce left in there? That was from the first draft. Bruce was changed to0 the Knight. I'll have to go in and look for it and give RoG a heads up.

[rizzo]

Completely great as always, Max. Are you going to put a book together at any point?

[mburbank]

I'm looking for a literary agent to represent me, but have been for quite some time and no damn takers.

I really don't want to self publish.

Thanks, though.

[Geggy]

Yesterday I saw a license plate that said "DAVED". As in, "you have been 'DAVED'."

[Jigby Huggletinks]

DAVE DESERVES DEATH BY THE HAND OF THE FOLLOWERS OF BURBANK.

I shall investigate my local library's policy on holding puppet shows, and I will most likely be attempting to perform this show live, in your honor.

[Tetsu Deinonychus]

If anyone actually does perform this play, be sure to film it and put it on Youtube or something so we can all enjoy it (if that's okay with Max). This would be the best puppet show ever!

[Colonel Flagg]

It would have been great if this puppet show were featured instead of the one with that stinking goatherd in "The Sound of Music". The dialogue would have been spot on. And Julie Andrews would have sung it, too. Bonus.

[LeNoRe18]

personally I was waiting for Dave to go ballistic on the other two puppets XD I mean I would have if I was him XD

[SunnyD]

I just live the sort of cynical way in which things like these are written. It makes me just want to get up and kick babies around, but in a good way.

[Dungeonbrownies]

by god, you must really hate dave.

[Desert_Screams]

Is there going to be a sequel? There must be a sequel. Dave's revenge-- or perhaps that of the dog (ghost-dog)? It will be more looney brilliance, no doubt about it.

[Marthaeus Autolykos]

This reminded me a lot of "The Bald Soprano."

[mburbank]

Dude! I love Ionesco!

[Fat_Hippo]

Just plain fucked up, and hilarious. If people had any common sense, THIS would be performed by schools, instead of the usual shit heaps knows as school plays.

[butthead99]

what the fuck dude? puppet bashing? lol

[executioneer]

huh huh, those puppets are made of wood

[Count Mek]

Once again, masterly work Max!
Max Poowwweeer!

[Travis touchdown]

"At least the author knew better than to give you any real lines. Then it'd be all

(The Knight begins to caper about stage, flapping his arms making a hideous donkey noise)"
my brain just exploded with awesome