The Very Last Summer Vacation Ever - Chapter Three

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[Colonel Flagg]

We'll leave the light on fer ya.

[Jony B. Good]

Until I read 'Internet' I thought the story was in a different time setting, like in the 70's. Love your narrative, Max. Waiting for the next part.

[bertleman]

Thank you for writing more stuff, funnyman.
I had to go back and read it twice to understand the miniature golf part was a daydream. Please crank out more funny words for our amusement.

[pikmin4]

Very good story!

[resident-adam]

Chapter 4 when? Damn good read!