my goth poem.

[sadie]

life sucks.
i wear black.
i look dead.

i'd kill myself,
but then people
would rejoice.

and joy sucks.


>:

[Tropical]

you're too observant to be goth

[FS]

"Gothic Poem" by FS.



BLACK




thank you.

[CrapOnAStick]

How about my poem?

My life is a void
Filled with emptiness
The emptiness of sorrow
I think I'll kill myself.

I should an award >:

[sadie]

yah. you should win the "my sphincter is the most stretched and raw" award.

[Spectre X]

OK, here's mine:

ahem......

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGFH!!! THE WORLD SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[LegoLars]

Poem: Teh Watercolors of the world.

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLORLFOROL.

Im the funney. :(

[Generator86]

My award-winning goth poem:

Ravens and tombstones!
My only friends
Besides

All my black make-up

I stare into
Nothingness
And see fishnet stockings with holes in them

God is despair

[Spectre X]

here's another one of mine.

ahem.....

I'm tired of the world.
it is dark and empty.
people are stupid.
I think I'll go slit my throat right after watching The Two Towers.
bye.

well?

[jin]

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You seen the ******s "battle rap" now its time for angsty teenagers in black!

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[22:10] <JiN^> *oh no, goth peotry time*
[22:10] <Deus_> yes, that is right
[22:10] <Deus_> the darkness stole my hooker
[22:10] <Deus_> i kicked him in the shin
[22:11] <Deus_> and bantered about black mascara
[22:11] <JiN^> how about a lil spontaneous goth freestyle!
[22:11] <JiN^> ok.
[22:11] <SPMAN> ...
[22:11] <Deus_> oh shit
[22:11] <tekkr0n1k> omfg
[22:11] <JiN^> Lets go.
[22:11] <SPMAN> insanity
[22:11] <tekkr0n1k> u have any goth friends?
[22:11] <Deus_> you ready to bite this shit?
[22:11] <JiN^> The raven night steals into myblack soul
[22:11] <JiN^> the place where the darkness lives
[22:11] <JiN^> the tears i cry flow and grow through the night
[22:12] <JiN^> how fast does black travel?
[22:12] <JiN^> the moon hears my tears, my cries, my anguish]
[22:12] <JiN^> its time for you to go.
[22:12] <Deus_> amazing.
[22:12] <Deus_> how dark is the night when the moon is broken
[22:12] <Deus_> i can feel something boiling within my soul
[22:13] <Deus_> pain and love are one and the same
[22:13] <Deus_> i do not wish to carry on in such a fashion
[22:13] <Deus_> bury myself and kill me later
[22:14] <JiN^> The pain flows through me
[22:14] <Deus_> i am just as dead as edgar allen poe
[22:14] <JiN^> Like a turrent of needles
[22:14] <tekkr0n1k> I love to take a blunt of kronic to the face.... OMFG, I
love the great taste.... But , nevertheless my health is unpure, but this
kronic smoke is surely the cure
[22:14] <JiN^> He speaks in words i cannot say
[22:14] <JiN^> tells me to take my life away
[22:14] <JiN^> the soul is already gone
[22:15] <JiN^> the dark one has reclaimed what he needed
[22:15] <JiN^> from me
[22:15] <JiN^> to cry, i wait
[22:15] <JiN^> for the sun to shine again
[22:15] <JiN^> but it never does.
[22:15] <JiN^> the rain it falls
[22:15] <JiN^> it drips, it pours
[22:15] <JiN^> the snow, so white
[22:15] <JiN^> cannot brithen up this night
[22:15] <JiN^> i find myself in
[22:15] <JiN^> forevermore.
[22:17] <JiN^> ... *switch*
[22:17] <Deus_> the moon hangs low this night
[22:17] <Deus_> like a guillotine waiting to drop
[22:17] <Deus_> or an axe ready to swing
[22:17] <Deus_> i am waiting for you, oh dark one
[22:18] <Deus_> to fill me with your beautiful evil
[22:19] <Deus_> i can no longer go on
[22:19] <Deus_> i am a ghost in a shell
[22:19] <Deus_> this world is a living hell
[22:19] <Deus_> one for life and two for death
[22:20] <JiN^> I see the people on the street
[22:20] <JiN^> these people i meet
[22:20] <JiN^> all the pathetic insects
[22:20] <JiN^> crawling ontowards theirdoom
[22:20] <JiN^> why oh why i wonder
[22:20] <JiN^> in my castle,
[22:20] <JiN^> the sanctity that is my room
[22:20] <JiN^> the crosses hang heavy as they wander past
[22:21] <JiN^> meandering at this and that
[22:21] <JiN^> never knowing what the story was
[22:21] <JiN^> never caring that their existence will be over one day
[22:21] <JiN^> but i do
[22:21] <JiN^> i know
[22:21] <JiN^> that is why i now go
[22:21] <JiN^> to my room
[22:21] <JiN^> and pl.ace the razor on my wrist
[22:21] <JiN^> pull is just so
[22:21] <JiN^> the river of red it flows.
[22:22] <Deus_> place a sheath over my face
[22:22] <Deus_> and don't visit my funeral
[22:22] <Deus_> i'll be back from the dead soon enough
[22:23] <Deus_> to hastily torment you and all your kind
[22:23] <Deus_> i am value and you are worthless
[22:23] <Deus_> soon you will be like me
[22:23] <Deus_> but i will kill you twice
[22:23] <Deus_> my world is a paradise
[22:23] <Deus_> because you cannot fester here
[22:24] <Deus_> my world is a heaven
[22:24] <JiN^> I struggle through my fear
[22:24] <JiN^> a heaven made for two
[22:24] <JiN^> but your place is empty
[22:24] <JiN^> will i ever find
[22:24] <JiN^> the reasons why
[22:24] <JiN^> you never stopped to say hello
[22:24] <JiN^> all you ever said was goodbye
[22:25] <JiN^> but this time my side is empty too
[22:25] <JiN^> i wander facelessly amongst this crowd
[22:25] <JiN^> no one knows that though i am dead inside
[22:25] <JiN^> the outside is just the same
[22:25] <JiN^> everyone will lose
[22:25] <JiN^> kill you all for no reason
[22:25] <JiN^> but all the reasons at the same time
[22:26] <JiN^> victims of the scythe
[22:26] <JiN^> the blood will taste like wine
[22:26] <Deus_> it will flow like a fountain
[22:26] <Deus_> and consume your magnificence
[22:26] <Deus_> existence is nonexistent
[22:27] <Deus_> atleast for you
[22:27] <Deus_> i will never experience this purgatory
[22:27] <Deus_> your stagnation makes you ugly
[22:27] <Deus_> putrid and rotting you can never join our legion
[22:28] <Deus_> fear us, for we are many
[22:28] <Deus_> we do not cast spells, we do not tell secrets
[22:28] <JiN^> where once what you saw was lunacy
[22:28] <JiN^> the masses make us great
[22:28] <JiN^> the common bond between us
[22:28] <JiN^> the one thing you fear
[22:28] <JiN^> your god is not here
[22:28] <JiN^> the power is overwhelming
[22:28] <JiN^> sometimes i fear it myself
[22:29] <JiN^> but the jocks, the overmasters of our old selves
[22:29] <JiN^> the ones who mocked us as we did our young spells
[22:29] <JiN^> caused us that pain
[22:29] <JiN^> will be rid of the earth
[22:30] <Deus_> our eyes glow red
[22:30] <Deus_> with the pain you feel inside
[22:30] <Deus_> we thirst for your mortality
[22:30] <Deus_> and splendor in our own
[22:30] <Deus_> visions of death and destruction
[22:30] <Deus_> chaos and hurt
[22:31] <Deus_> our honesty is piercing
[22:31] <Deus_> and your divinity is lacking
[22:31] <Deus_> embrace death and all its glory
[22:31] <Deus_> you have nothing to lose but your life
[22:31] <JiN^> fight with nothing to gain
[22:32] <JiN^> you cannot stop us the horde
[22:32] <JiN^> our command,
[22:32] <JiN^> our word,
[22:32] <JiN^> they burn you as you fear
[22:32] <JiN^> our power grows greater
[22:32] <JiN^> every stray word, the thoughts you have
[22:32] <JiN^> which are to mock us.
[22:33] <JiN^> never will your weak mortal ideals again bend us
[22:33] <JiN^> hurt us, to make us cry
[22:33] <JiN^> like "sissys" and "babies"
[22:33] <JiN^> we rise, the night our cloak and dagger
[22:33] <JiN^> hide.
[22:34] <tekkr0n1k> let darkness fill your soul with hatred and violence, as
you take a gulp before you gasp for your last breath... Let me laugh and
have you see the blackness of my inner soul and thy shall speak of only
evil. Take your life as it has been givin to you the same way it will be
taken. Before your eyes, you will once be again..... awakened. good night
[22:34] <Deus_> perhaps we are not of this world
[22:35] <Deus_> is that what frightens you
[22:35] <Deus_> our lack of humanity?
[22:35] <Deus_> look closer
[22:35] <Deus_> and take a step back
[22:35] <Deus_> you are the problem
[22:35] <Deus_> we are the solution
[22:36] <Deus_> we are humanity
[22:36] <Deus_> you are the curse upon this world
[22:36] <Deus_> one day we will rid the world of your idiocy
[22:36] <Deus_> one day we will be free
[22:37] <JiN^> free to dress and act as we like
[22:37] <JiN^> without the blight
[22:37] <JiN^> known as YOU
[22:37] <JiN^> to judge what we are
[22:37] <JiN^> who we are
[22:37] <JiN^> what we do
[22:37] <JiN^> the pressure it curses through my veins
[22:37] <JiN^> i feel like i am going to explode
[22:38] <JiN^> in a torrent of flesh and daggers
[22:38] <JiN^> straight into your own
[22:38] <JiN^> until your soul cries out in pain
[22:38] <JiN^> cries and screams and yells
[22:38] <JiN^> let me out!
[22:38] <JiN^> i want it to end, this pressure i feel
[22:38] <JiN^> inside me.
[22:38] <JiN^> LET ME OUT!
[22:39] <Deus_> this is our manifesto
[22:39] <Deus_> our letter of hate
[22:39] <Deus_> trapped in the cage of my soul
[22:39] <Deus_> you cannot hear my words
[22:40] <Deus_> i am screaming
[22:40] <Deus_> not a soul can hear me
[22:40] <Deus_> when will you learn
[22:40] <Deus_> we are not yours
[22:40] <Deus_> to be bought
[22:40] <Deus_> to be sold
[22:40] <JiN^> This is our last dance
[22:40] <JiN^> alas the night grows old
[22:41] <JiN^> im sorry to draw away
[22:41] <JiN^> but the morning comes
[22:41] <JiN^> i cannot stay
[22:41] <JiN^> i bid you au revoir
[22:41] <JiN^> *** THE END ***

PS. I still CANNOT BELIEVE I spent a half-hour of my life doing this. MERDE!

PPS. I AM NOT a GOTH

AHhahahaHAhaHAHHAhhahAhahaha

[JesusFishSticks]

Thats some good stuff. Comes close to emo poetry :) I sure do love a good hate.

[MUSTACE BANDIT]

:lol

[d0nkey]

here's another one of mine.

ahem.....

I'm tired of the world.
it is dark and empty.
people are stupid.
I think I'll go slit my throat right after watching The Two Towers.
bye.

well?

DUDE! at least wait until you see Return Of The King! Then.... you can go slit ya throat :)

[Dartanus]

I got bored. I wrote this. Enjoy.
He stands alone,
Bearing himself to the world,
The scars plain to see,
No longer hidden by illusion,
Shown through harsh reality.
His dreams shattered,
His hopes dashed,
They lay in pieces around him,
And he wonders,
Does anyone notice me?
Does anyone care?
Do I even care?
Only silence is his answer.
He starts to take the final step,
Away from all he once loved,
Towards oblivion,
He falls.

[sadie]

i had to pry my eyeballs out with a melonballer after reading that pile of steaming shit. fuck you.

[Protoclown]

:lol

[Cap'n Crunch]

I'm glad he is gone from the boards.

[SisterOFMercy]

i think my piercing is infected.. :worship

[Anonymous]

omg sadie your poem is my head for real :(

[Les Waste]

i had to pry my eyeballs out with a melonballer after reading that pile of steaming shit
WHERE HAVE I HEARD THAT BEFORE?!?! :lol :lol :lol :(

[sadie]

:lol regurgitated shit. :yum

[GothNAPrepsBody]

Alright thats enough bull shit, heres true goth shit


[center:cc268be613]All alone[/center:cc268be613]
My firend
there is so much you keep asking me
About the grudges I hold and how they rarely end
I just don't know how you can't see...

The reason for this armour of hatred
I don't understand how you can act so innocent,
Cuz keeps me safe from all youve said
I just don't understand how you can comment...

About me wielding this sword of pain,
It's what helps me deliver a painfull sting,
Cuz it releases my fury like a fiery rain,
I just don't understand how your questions are continuing...

About my boots of ruthlessness
they guard my feet from your verbal spliters,
And let me stomp you mourningless,
I dont understand so I wont let the questions enter...

My mind as if I didn't hear,
You sittin here continuing to harp,
And I'll ignore you while you pretend to care,
Cuz you my friend are why Im alone here in the dark.


Drake Mitchelle

[Jeanette X]

Drake Mitchelle

Jesus kid, you can't even spell your own last name right!

[pickleninja]

Alright thats enough bull shit, heres true goth shit


[center:dbc9d6bab8]All alone[/center:dbc9d6bab8]
My firend
there is so much you keep asking me
About the grudges I hold and how they rarely end
I just don't know how you can't see...

The reason for this armour of hatred
I don't understand how you can act so innocent,
Cuz keeps me safe from all youve said
I just don't understand how you can comment...

About me wielding this sword of pain,
It's what helps me deliver a painfull sting,
Cuz it releases my fury like a fiery rain,
I just don't understand how your questions are continuing...

About my boots of ruthlessness
they guard my feet from your verbal spliters,
And let me stomp you mourningless,
I dont understand so I wont let the questions enter...

My mind as if I didn't hear,
You sittin here continuing to harp,
And I'll ignore you while you pretend to care,
Cuz you my friend are why Im alone here in the dark.


Drake Mitchelle

The ferret can make you happy

http://www.caeda.net/ferret.jpg

Bitch :(

[Jeanette X]

http://www.caeda.net/ferret.jpg

The cuddly ferret will make anyone happy. :)

[GothNAPrepsBody]

Drake Mitchelle

Jesus kid, you can't even spell your own last name right!

No, I can maybe the deal is that you don't know what it's spelled like...



And actually that ferret iis one of the cute things in this world that makes me want to vomit.

[Esuohlim]

Goths like vomitting.

Or maybe not, I don't know. Maybe you could tell me more about gothic culture, or I'll just turn the Discovery Channel on. >:

[GothNAPrepsBody]

You know you really don't seem to know anything about any one, so I suggest untill you do get some general knowledge to shut up, That should keep you off for quite a while.

[Grazzt]

My life is dark
Why doesn't Anne Rice respond to my fan mail?

[Jeanette X]

You wrote it as "Drake Mitchel" in General Blabber, now you write it as "Drake Mitchelle"?

You know you really don't seem to know anything about any one, so I suggest untill you do get some general knowledge to shut up, That should keep you off for quite a while.

Well, Gothy-poo, perhaps you can give us a brief history of gothic culture, where it originated, important people in the scene, etc... :blah

Or perhaps you can't, seeing as you aren't really a goth?

[Esuohlim]

HE'S AARON FUCKING CARTER.

He probably goes to school every day and the kids make fun of him because he looks like Aaron Carter. Then he begins to wear gay spikes are black clothing to make himself look more intimidating and dangerous, only they laugh harder because now he just looks like Aaron Carter with a fresh new look. Then he goes home and tries to get to the courage to carve pentagrams in his arms, but his "Junior Scout Pocket Knife" only has tweezers and a can opener. This makes him sad. Now he is so angry that he wants to go on the Internet and, with extreme incoherence, make fun of people.

I've figured it out.

[pickleninja]

http://www.caeda.net/ferret.jpg

The cuddly ferret will make anyone happy. :)

doesn't apply to Goths >:

[Mister Sarcastic]

Goths are inteligent and friendly. :rolleyes

On rye bread with some mayonaise. :rolleyes :rolleyes

Look, I'm rolling eyes at my own statement, because it's a crappy South Park refrence that doesnt' apply. :rolleyes

Looks like I gayed up THIS thread :rolleyes

[mischief]

now he just looks like Aaron Carter with a fresh new look.
I've figured it out.

>: you give him way too much credit. maybe the carters' gay cousin they lock in the closet.

[Esuohlim]

Just wait. When he posts again in this thread, he'll prove my statement correct.

[executioneer]

bimp

[sadie]

yay!

freaky but true:
i was just thinking about this thread and scrolling down the last page in this forum wishing i'd retrieved it.
and then, like, whoah!

[sadie]

wow. i used to be so much more hardcore. :O

[EisigerBiskuit]

Famous gothan poetry I found so far:

It is dark...
I hate me...
Die me die...
BALLSBALLSBALLS