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Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: ineffability
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Sep 4th, 2003, 10:16 AM
i don't think it's so much the poem is made up of ordinary sentences that makes it seem un-poem-like. it's more that there are no details. poetry is about specifics. plus, the word preclude fits not within the tone of the rest of the piece.
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