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Drew Katsikas Drew Katsikas is offline
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Old Oct 16th, 2003, 05:24 PM       
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Originally Posted by glowbelly
summary for those who don't want to read the whole thing:

look there's a dead lady.
i like the sun.
i like the fire.
i like the sun.
look there's a dead lady.
fire!
sun!
ok.
the end.
Glowbelly, I'd love to hear your summary of other novels, not that my stories are that good, but I wouldn't be surprised to hear:

Old Man and the Sea: I want to catch a fish but I suck at it. I try, but I can't. Then I dream about Lions

Portrait of the Artist: he says moocow alot

then he wants to fuck whores and fears hell

Play it as it Lays:

she gets an abortion and keeps talking about drugs

Fear and Loathing:

more drugs

A Clean Well Lighted Place:let's get drunk in the shade.
he is deaf

Could you be at least a little more objective in your criticism? It's kind of invalid when you over-simplfiy stuff. There's certain reasons for the whole sun vs fire talk, and they describe certain reasons why they dis/like each one.
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