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Originally Posted by DrewKatsikas
I still need to write some sort of introductory element, where the two men first find the woman. I plan on having them meet her inadvertantly, and she goes about seducing one of the men. The other is sort of horrified as they go at it, but his friend coerces him to do the same. Perhaps this will take place under an apple tree, but that might be beating a dead horse at this point. After he finishes, he suddenly realizes how cold out it is. He also realizes he's nude, and quickly dresses. The woman starts flipping out, they choke her or something, and then light a fire due to the cold. That's where it will come into the story.
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So there is a "lady of the woods" who seduces random travellers? And then regrets having done so and "flips out"? So then the two guys that were seduced by her kill her? All under an apple tree? No offense, but what the fuck kind of stupid idea is that?