ok, please comment on my resume. not so much for spelling and duplication errors (like putting the twice or some shit), more for what you think content wise, or if there are gramattical errors.
please tell me if there is anything confusing, that could be stated better, or that you feel could be better explained.
i appreciate your help on this. sometimes when writing these stupid resumes it is hard to take a cold hard look at the darn thing and whittle it down to a quick, easy read.
also tell me how you feel about the style. i have been told that the narrative style is becoming very popular because it is easier to read and does not get cluttered up with dates and such that matter little to a manager conducting an interview (only HR wonks care about dates, or so my experience ha been).
thank you for your time