[Spectre X]

One does not have to be able to draw very well himself in order to give critiques. What they DO need, however, is knowledge of proper proportions and you have to be able to define if certain anatomical distortions are intentional (i.e. part of the style) or not.

That being said, the slight anatomical distortions here, are clearly intentional, and it works. It works very well, even.

Really good stuff. Most people I see going for an anime style do this stupidly. Make it bland etc. You, however, make it look rather good.