[Anonymous]

Thanks, Helm. I was seriously considering calming down the range of line thicknesses anyway, in addition to thickening everything a bit. The right hand looks a little odd (most of the detail is omitted) because a gun is going to cover up most of that appendage. The leg looks weird to me in general, like it's shortening him a bit.

I agree on the shading method, but wouldn't a soft blue conflict with the colors already in the clothing (white/blues)? Also, what do you mean by glossy style?

I've removed the outlines on the Vs. And thanks for the tips on cartoonization. :>