[Poxpower]

-right hand looks weird, fingers look really cramped and the tension of the dress suggests it would be hard to fit a hand in there. I'm not sure if its a pocket too :P It doesn't seem deep enough

-Gun looks weird because you made it all 3-d, but not the area around the trigger. That part ( where the finger normally fits into) is only in 2-d. You could try make the contrasts of light/shadows higher on the gun too, so it would see more 3-d and less just shiny, and putting the finger on the trigger would probably work nicely too

-tilted foot looks weird :P Kinda looks unbalanced, but that might be because I can't see the whole picture all at once

-love the facial expression.

I like it : )