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Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Fribbulus Xax
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Mar 11th, 2003, 10:10 AM
I think the line about him returning 13 years later was supposed to be the last line in the introduction, so it would refer to Harry.
So, not only is punctuation, grammar and placement of capital letters fucked up, it's also in the wrong order.
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