That's pretty good, Chojin. Only one problem: you neglected to read the rest of the story first. Here's a quote from where the last one left off:
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Struggle though he could, Beast Boy was unable to escape Silais' iron grip on his neck. {Your little prank destroyed my lab, you idiot.} Beast Boy shivered in fear. {But that's not why I'm angry at you.} This caught him off guard. {Tell me, do you know what THIS is?} He shoved something in front of his face, and it took a moment for Beast Boy to open his eyes to look at it. It was tan-colored, and it had a blocky white outgrowth on it. He remembered it from somewhere. In fact, it looked like...
{An arm,} Silais finished for him. {Roll's arm, to be exact.} He smacked Beast Boy in the head with it, which hurt immensely. {This is the largest remaining part of her. Do you have any idea how long it took to assemble her? I'll be lucky if I can get her back together by this time next month!} He started to squeeze, strangling the shape-shifter. {Your little stunt could have killed someone.} He threw him into the wall headfirst. {Actually, it did kill someone. You.} Beast Boy cowered in fear as Silais' eyes narrowed. {Because you aren't going to live long enough to regret it.}
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Had you read further into it, you would have noticed that Roll is in fact Roll from the Megaman series, and is thus a robot, and not human. Check before you mock. It makes you much more credible.