okay.
at least check out the song i wrote and tell me what you think. i've posted the acoustic version of it before, but it sounds much cooler electric, i think.
there's just one thing about it. it doesn't seem to me like the vocals and the music mesh; i'm not sure what it is. maybe the vocals are too loud?
here it is:
http://www.pomofos.com/verge.mp3
please?