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Originally Posted by Big McLargehuge
“Home” it was the only place that would make sense after this.
My destination is in my mind too. Home, with a pit stop at the place I am staying to get some funds.
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Literally, your boyhood home? What is your motivation towards it ... or is your motivation just to be away from wherever you're at?
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Originally Posted by Big McLargehuge
After all, isn’t that the only thing that ever kills anyone, change of direction?
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I like this line because it can be taken both literally and figuratively. I'm not sure which you meant ... and if you meant both, the obscurity of the double-entendre is nice and it fits here.
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Originally Posted by Big McLargehuge
Well fuck. I should have seen this one coming, you should have seen this one coming. After all nothing lost is ever found, and if anything is ever found it must be lost.
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You can't go home again?
Overall, I liked it although I wasn't sure whether you were going for a stream-of-conscious piece or a more philosophical and coherent style.