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Mocker
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Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: i come from the water
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Jul 13th, 2005, 07:45 PM
Don't they teach compostition at your college?
I'd break that up into paragraphs, take out the parenthetical reamark (or give it it's own sentence - you just don't do this sort of thing in FORMAL writing), and add a few periods to make it easier on the eyes.
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