[MLE]

an artistic crit for your daughter:

hey there, it looks like you cut corners a bit in the less interesting parts of the pictures and smudged. I personally think that if you take your time on the entire picture as a whole instead of piece by piece, it'll come out much much better.

This isn't to say that doing part by partand smudging don't have their place. I just think that if you spent more time on these and varied your grey tones more, you'd have two very excellent pieces. I like the composition on the cheshire cat more than the first picture.