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Old Mar 26th, 2006, 09:57 PM        Re: I recommend you read my poem
Blued

A kiss, a bruise to my blue lips
caught off guard I step back
curious self-doubting I wonder why
me be the recipient of such hot tough love.
Tough loved by my cloud eyed darling

she my tamarack my lost at sea my one true belief
the last thing I ever clung to.
Oh so you abandon
leave me moored to the last lonely
untouched rock
in me.
In my cloud blue sea.

Break me cut
me a bestringered fish ruining my iridescent
leather scales against the sharp rocks
hiding deep in mud. Surprised
deceived I come around to see how
soft your bite used to be.
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