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Originally Posted by Grislygus
I don't know if I can offer tips that you would want on the first drawing, because it's very stylized and you obviously have a very clear idea of what you want to do with it. But from an anatomical standpoint, he has all twelve ribs below his chest, where his diaphram is. On a real person, only three or so ribs would be visibly below his pecs. You've got the diaphram right on, but only a few ribs would take up that space.
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Eh. I haven't seen my ribs in years, so I forgot how many there are supposed to be. It's not twelve, but six. I started off with three, and said "That can't be right." and doubled it. :/
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The second one's pretty damned good. The only problem I see is that his right arm is too short. I would also make his right hand open, but that is strictly a personal preference, and has little consequence on way or the other.
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The right arm is my poor attempt at foreshortening. And I can't make his hand open, because he doesn't have hands.