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Old Nov 7th, 2007, 10:45 AM       
biased. You always use this word incorrectly. Your sentence calls for the past tense. Something may have a bias which means it is biased.

And ABC is not the media. 'The Media' is plural, a vast plural. ABC is a single media outlet. Here your flawed writing reveals a flawed thought process.

Slow down. Bite off amounts you are capable of chewing. Chew with your mouth closed and don't talk with your mouth full. It may turn out that you have something worth saying, but you are like a child in his first year of violin who insists on playing concertos instead of 'hot cross buns'. You come across as a blithering idiot, and even in cases where you might be correct about something, you tarnish your side of the argument by arguing it so poorly.

Simplify, take some care or simply embrace being a laughing stock human pinata clown
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