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Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: How The Hell Should I Know?!!
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May 14th, 2003, 07:03 AM
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Originally Posted by kellychaos
Quoth The Dark Cynical One:
I have schooling, (should be a period here) I am salodictorian (sp) of two of my cores and valodictorian (sp) of English, (should be a period here) I also model for Jinco and reel for $150.00 an hour and know 289 ways of making a bomb and (comma) if I forget (comma)I have 3 references on my shelf and that raggedy ass carpet of yours would catch fire very quickly (should be a period here)I suggest you fuck off and stop trying to comfort yourself.
- End quoth
Since your going to be a smart ass that comma should be before the and
There are problably more errors than that (the greatest of which being an error in judgement in thinking we cared) but I don't have the time or the inclination to find them. Don't trip over your valedictorian graduation robe getting off the short bus. 
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