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Is a RoboCop.
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: How do you like these apples, Chojin?
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Apr 27th, 2009, 11:41 PM
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Originally Posted by 90's Child
But could someone please provide some sort of actual constructive criticism rather than "U R teh sUcks LawlS". Ya know, something to help me improve on my apparently craptacular writing.
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Originally Posted by Misdemonar
YOUR WRITING IS MEDIOCRE, YOUR CHARACTERS ARE UNISPIRED, YOU REUSE WORDS, PEPOLE WANT CHARACTERS DESCRIBED IN THE TEXT, NOT IN A SEPRATE PROFILE, AND YOUR PLOT IS BORING TRIPE THAT HAS BEEN USED A THOUSAND TIMES.
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