[Kitsa]

I involuntarily eyerolled at "Lou Garou", but I'm French...so, you know.

I guess if you want constructive criticism it would be helpful to know exactly where you're going with this. Is this something you're cutting your teeth on, something that would otherwise never see the light of day? I mean, you're entitled to practice. Or is this something that you're fleshing out for publication? Something for a writing class?

You understand that if I'm seen being "too nice" to you, Tadao's going to materialize out of the woodwork again to accuse me of mothering someone.