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Originally Posted by Tadao
I don't agree with editing it. The Jap in me wants to hit you with a bamboo cane.
YOU KNOW THE STORY! REWRITE IT! PRACTICE!
The fluff and stuff helped support the weak pillars. Tear it down and start a new foundation that is free from the virus that spread throughout the paragraphs.
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Dangit. I wish I had read that post before I started editing.
And it seems to me that it works a bit better for me to do massive, massive editing rather than rewriting it from scratch, because I seem to work much better with a framework to go upon rather than from scratch.
Well, I posted the 2nd draft of Chapter 1, so take a look and see if anything improved, and what else I need to do the chang it to make it not suck other than removing all the most unweildy and stumbling prose (which I tried to do)
And what weak pillars do you see other than craptastic prose?