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Aug 14th, 2009, 12:49 AM
dunno if you were looking for critique but i noticed a lot of issues with the grammar and the spelling mistakes were especially obvious - from a quick glance at page 2 i noticed 'immortal', 'imagine' and 'fulfillment' were each missing a letter.
so yeah, not sure if those were intentional or what but they were pretty big distractions for me. other than that it looks great!
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