Thread: The Very Last Summer Vacation Ever - Prologue
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Old May 4th, 2011, 01:32 AM       
The dialogue is quite good in spite of it having to be so exposition-y. But the kicker is in the discriptions. Detailed and entertaining; like Hemmingway had a boring-ectomy.
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