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Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Nice Chinese Restaurant
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Jan 20th, 2008, 09:03 AM
I wouldn't necessarily cut out descriptions, as that's what makes the story feel the way it does. I just need visual space. a huge block of text isn't very approachable.
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