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Originally Posted by Babs
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I made peace with it being a rough mix, so with that said I think the arrangement could use a bit of work. All the pieces are good, but in my opinion you should take the time to explore them a bit before layering so quickly.
The first synth could go a bit longer and you could let the drums do some work. Build it up a bit for 30sec~1min. Then you bring in the next string synth with some new drum work on it. Finally, add your arp synth with it all. It is a simple build, but it was just for an example.
I feel like all the parts are good, but you're not giving the listener enough time to truly appreciate the layers.
Not trying to come off as a dick or anything, but just saying you got good part and now it's time to put some meat on the song.
Keep it up and keep posting maynggg