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Join Date: Jun 2003 
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				May 10th, 2004, 11:43 PM
			
			
			
		
			
			       
				
			
			  
		
 
	
	
		
		
		As much as I like your drawings i don't like the bigger one in the brown. I know that you were trying to push the anatomy of it, but i don't exactly like where you went with it. The 4 pack stomach with an excessivly large belly just draws my attention away from the rest of the drawing. The bottom is too long and stretched to look good with a heavy set top like you have. The left arm is too vainy and wrinkled. Also the hand is a little too small or just at a bad angle. Also its probably just me but I see too much of a human face on it with an animal nose. 
 
Another thing that I just don't like is the pupil, I'm a fan of the pupil-less eye and i think it would work on something that is suppose to be demonic like this  
 
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I like the smaller more detailed red one, though... 
		
	
		
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