My Pete and Pete fan fiction

[Jeanette X]

My first Pete and Pete fan fiction. Please give me feed back, as I will be adding installments.
Endless Mike lay on his bed, staring up at the ceiling. He had gone through a particularly bad day, as his father had become more and more irritable after losing his job, and was taking it out on the family. After the screaming argument that his parents had which cumulated in his father storming out, presumably to get drunk, his mother lay down on the couch and cried her eyes out. He had done what he could to comfort her, but seeing her in such a state left him feeling helpless and frustrated.
He felt anger boil up within him. Why did he have to go through this with his parents? Why couldn't he have a normal family like other people? Why couldn't he get passing grades?
He ran his large fingers through his oily black hair, sighed, and slipped into the fantasy that made life tolerable.
He imagined her before him, grinning her gap-toothed grin in that cute way that made him weak in the knees. He remembered when she had first entered into Mr. Slurm's class, and how he had felt his heart pound as he saw how beautiful she had become. Sure, he had seen her passing him in the halls last year, but then she was still a just a little girl. Now...now she had grown, had changed, transformed into the beautiful young woman he saw before him. From that day forward, Endless Mike was hopelessly infatuated with Ellen Hickle.