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Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: incoherant
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Oct 17th, 2003, 02:07 AM
I liked this paragraph
[quote]Lightness took to his chest as he brushed all the soot off his miserable work clothes, which were supposed to be left behind at the mining factory. Still, John managed to take these dirty clothes home with him. He never gave this practice consideration, but it had been a ritual to him since as far as he could remember. He would sneak them home, and be sure to stash them somewhere in his trailer where they wouldn’t be seen until Monday morning. However, John would always ruin this attempt of concealment, and bring them out, admiring them through glazed, world-weary eyes.
The rest was crap.
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