Story I wrote

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I wouldn't immediately fob it off as stupid, but there's a few too many perhapses and mights to it. I know a lot of writers simply start writing and see where the story takes them, but writing a story from right to left sounds like an easy way to get entangled in your own plotlines. You might want to extrapolate things a little further before you start writing, or write a gross summary. That's what I do, anyway.