Nope. You gotta put some gay references in there and a little story too.
Your way was just boring. :/
Here I'll show you...
MetalMilitia begged ArrowX for sex before they were going to become zombie chow. As the zombies were steadily bashing the door open, ArrowX complied and proceeded to take Melitia's one inch hairless into his mouth. Suffering from premature ajaculation due to the stress of imminent death, Metal released his manseed into ArrowX. Metal then quickly bent over for ArrowX. Time was as short as ArrowX's dick. But alas, no sooner had Arrow slipped his cocktail weiner into Metal's pimple infested ass, the zombies broke in and ate both of those fags. (Literally)
THE END
You're a fucktard.
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