hey people! I made poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[hammered_soul]

Well, even though some people have said this thread is in the wrong forum, I may as well make an attempt to submit some decent poetry. No, it's not about teenage love or suicide either, so don't fret

Slit
Inhale
The walls around you warp
Exhale
The toxin swirls around in your veins
Inhale
You sway upon your feet
Exhale
The smoke clouds your vision
Inhale
Reality breaks apart
Exhale
Thoughts flash through your mind
"Have I done the right thing in escaping this reality?"
Inhale
"Was your original existence not dull?"
Exhale
"Indeed it was, but will I ever return?"
Inahle
"No"
Exhale
Your inhibitions shatter
Inhale
The twisted vision in front of you blazes by
Exhale
No more breath