hey

[Asila]

I only got through half of one of Tribes draft, but it was due to time and not a lack of interest. I really like your use of descriptions, and they're really vivid but not overwrought or overdone--like, for instance, the way I write--but you do use a loooooot of commas. They stop the eye somewhat, they're so prolific.

[Misdemonar]

Thank you for taking the time to read my draft, and the review, it means alot to me :o