My comic

[elx]

dunno if you were looking for critique but i noticed a lot of issues with the grammar and the spelling mistakes were especially obvious - from a quick glance at page 2 i noticed 'immortal', 'imagine' and 'fulfillment' were each missing a letter.

so yeah, not sure if those were intentional or what but they were pretty big distractions for me. other than that it looks great!

[Kat]

Yes, I tend to type faster than I should and then not check over it. I get a lot of typos that way.

But thank you.