What do you think of this?

[mburbank]

Gol, I'm pretty tired after working full time, freelancing, and taking care of my home and kids. I sleep fairly well. Even better thn I did when I was a wee child hip deep in theories and smarm.

I think you are a fraud in that I've decided I don't believe you are fifteen. Not because you are 'too smart' but because I find it hard to credit a high school student could have had time enough in life to become so thoroughly didactic.

I do believe you're pampered and friendless. I just think you're much older, pampered and friendless.