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[Carnivore]

I am no authority on the subject, but it seems very professional and well-written to me. You use the narrative style very well.

Originally Posted by george

As the implementation of the customer networks proceeded I provided detailed status reports to my management, sales professionals, customers, and national and international vendors. Settled customer billing disputes and organized weekly meetings to bring together all the disparate elements involved in the WAN implemenation process to foster clear lines of communication. Utilized multiple computer software programs (Microsoft Office suite of programs, specialized data base programs) to provide total coverage of customer accounts.

To get picky with grammar, the sentences beginning with "Settled" and "Utilized" are not sentences as they lack a subject. It should be "I settled" and "I utilized" to be correct. You did the same thing in the next paragraph too.