election coverage from a child's point of view

[ScruU2wice]

Your artwork is shotty at best. Thers is no balance. the text is dragging the image to the bottom of the piece. there is very little rythm outside of the bullets which happen to be larger than gun barrel. The craftsmanship is weak, you took no time to block out your piece. How long did you spend on this because the very theme of it doesn't seem to be well thought out. To improve the drawing i think you should balance out the text, make it more uniform so it's easier to read and think of adding some color to it. Right now though it's not worth anything...