HOT TUPAC

[Studio8]

My thoughts:

I hate when black people in scripts say the word "dog" because it never seems placed right. Such is the case here.

Miranda's line about the holiday was decent but Tupac rolling his eyes made all of that really funny.

The east and west side line was suprisingly sort of clever, because those jokes usually never are.

I think there is a typo in the paragraph that describes what Marinda is carrying. But biggie freezing the fish is funny. And saying Got damned black molly is really funny too. I like it.

I hate "not in a gay way."

The water tower scene, unless I missed something, doesn't make any sense. But I hope that's how it was intended, because it was funny.

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Did you ask for someone to do all of this? I dunno. You're kind of funny.