Some self-written science fiction crap that goes nowhere.

[McMock]

Thanks Big. I'm always inconfident if people will feel the same way about what I think are cool ideas. I'm glad you like it.

FS. The story isn't even a rough form yet. This is just one of those dealies where the idea hits me, and I want to get it out of my system before I forget it. Yeah, the names are crap.

I've thought about that formula of everything thing a lot actually, and I could have explained about it in more detail in a couple of paragraphs if I wanted to, but it's not something you'd want to read about in detail.

Yeah, Major James is Colonel James's father. I pretty much wrote the story down from start to finish, without even having an ending or names for the guys in it, so when I came to the point where I needed a name for Colonel's father, Major just seemed to work.

I'll see if I can come up with a proper way to put some dynamism into the story and then I'll write it down proper, with detail and people not called Frank.

Thanks for writing down your ideas.