bac sux again

[eva01]

Originally Posted by Flea

Anime is one _ the best thing to come to USA. your just to stupid to see it, all you do is sit at home drink beer, talk about how you hate suave people, and black people and that you love to hunt, and you love bush get off your arse and go rent a anime and/or get a manga and try it you i bet haven't even seen a anime and your to stupid to read but you know what get your hand off your one-eyed trouser snake and start readin cuz boys you need to some day if your gonna keep bashing anime

Hmm... Your grammar is horrible. I underlined the incorrect portions of your paragraph... except for the extremely long run-on sentence after your initial sentence. First mistake, you need to insert an "of" before "the best". Second mistake, "thing" should be "things". Third and fourth mistakes, "your" should be "You're". Your fifth mistake is the extremely long run on sentence after the first sentence. There are several other mistakes contained within the run-on sentence: "a anime..." should be "an anime", "i" should be "I", again "a" should be "an", once again "your" should be "you're", "readin" should be "reading", "cuz" should be "because", and again "your" should be "you're", and "gonna" should be "going to". I noticed similar mistakes within your paragraph, so if you work hard on these areas every day you will improve. Oh, and you are neither suave nor intelligent. I suggest you start "readin" so your English skills will improve.