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Join Date: May 2006
Location: Oregon
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May 17th, 2006, 02:35 AM
The character of the asian Woman is not intended as a victim but miniscule sexual interest.
The memory remains is a refference to Damian's memory echoing throughout his psyche preventing him from romantically. sexually loving another woman.
Most of it needs a rewrite/extension , and I plan on doing such.
but gramattical errors aside ,do you think its a decent story for my first whack?
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