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Old May 17th, 2006, 02:35 AM       
The character of the asian Woman is not intended as a victim but miniscule sexual interest.

The memory remains is a refference to Damian's memory echoing throughout his psyche preventing him from romantically. sexually loving another woman.

Most of it needs a rewrite/extension , and I plan on doing such.

but gramattical errors aside ,do you think its a decent story for my first whack?
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