I liked it! "I didn't even know why I was fighting anymore. Was Dave dead? Kidnapped? Surgically altered to be given the appearance of April O'Neil? What?" HAHAHA!!!
Also I laughed out loud when I saw this...
Theodore: Oh, man! I wish I woulda stuck with rescuing Dave!
Only one little nitpick...
At the window name of the page, at the bottom of the window on the page, and after the review, you called the game "Teenage
Mutant Nice Chipmunks II", which should be called "Teenage
Mammal Nice Chipmunks II". Nothing against ya, just correcting you.