Family Feud!

[Emu]

I'm going to make this with bullet points

● Grandfather falls ill
● Aunt sends what appears to be a money plea to brother, who sends a carbon copy to son
● Aunt wants to make video logs of her father, a reasonable plea
● Aunt suggests ridiculously expensive camcorder
● Eric mentions that camcorder is ridiculously expensive, suggests cheaper alternative
● Aunt moans because the webcam can't move away from the computer, doesn't have YouTube Upload Software like the camcorder, and that she will also be using the camcorder to upload her own brand of YouTube Magic
● Eric and aunt exchange thinly veiled insults

[GADZOOKS]

You didn't explain who Chojin is in this story (he could be the brother for all we know), the importance of saving money for Grandpap's medication, the Aunt character's leeching of said money, NOR did you even describe anything about the Aunt's tomato venture (the comedic relief). The summary is a foggy mess that barely scratches at the heart of the story.

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I expect better from you! See me after class!