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Old Oct 9th, 2010, 03:50 AM       
Not to mention "it's" means "it is" whereas "its" is possessive. Caught that at least twice in the opening sentence. And "try's" should be "tries"
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Old Oct 10th, 2010, 11:23 AM       
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Not to mention "it's" means "it is" whereas "its" is possessive. Caught that at least twice in the opening sentence. And "try's" should be "tries"
Also, "looses" is used in place of "loses" in the first sentence.
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