This is a link to a cartoon fanfic I wrote a long time ago. I've pretty much almost discontinued writing it cause I thought it sucked. I'd like to hear your review on it, cause it was the first time I tried to write a story. Don't hold back on the critisim. If I get enough good reviews, maybe i'll get around to writing more chapters(maybe).
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/301202/1/